Friday, August 23, 2019
My made up story
In miss Raynel literacy we got to do some free writing i thought i would do something a little bit funny and short but if you like it please comment!
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Lilly, It’s Daisy
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of when I had a toy unicorn.
Next time, you could put more punctuation in there because it’s a bit hard to read.
Why did you choose to do a narrative on unicorns?
I loved your comment Daisy i chose a narrative on unicorns because i felt happy and joyful that day!
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