Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 23, 2019
My made up story
In miss Raynel literacy we got to do some free writing i thought i would do something a little bit funny and short but if you like it please comment!
Wednesday, August 21, 2019
Why we should brush our teeth
In Literacy we had to make a persuasive writing about any topic we wanted, I chose to do mine
about why we should brush our teeth. Do you brush your teeth morning and night? I do.
Tell me in the comments!
Why we should brush our teeth
about why we should brush our teeth. Do you brush your teeth morning and night? I do.
Tell me in the comments!
Why we should brush our teeth
By Lilly.
In my opinion we should brush our teeth because
it will prevent bacteria building up around your
front and back teeth.
it will prevent bacteria building up around your
front and back teeth.
The most important reason if you don't brush you
teeth you could get gum disease.
But if you brush your teeth it is very unlikely to
get diseases in your gums.
teeth you could get gum disease.
But if you brush your teeth it is very unlikely to
get diseases in your gums.
Another point is the sugar in the food that we eat
will build up on your teeth and they could start to
rot in a period of time so that is why it is
good to brush morning and night.
will build up on your teeth and they could start to
rot in a period of time so that is why it is
good to brush morning and night.
I therefore believe that you should brush your teeth
morning and night so you don't get diseases in your
gums and your teeth don't rot.
morning and night so you don't get diseases in your
gums and your teeth don't rot.
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
Protect our oceans from litter!
In literacy we had to make a persuasive writing about any topic I chose to do mine about litter in our oceans.
Have you ever seen litter in the oceans? If you have, do you pick it up? Let me know in the comments .
Why we need to protect our oceans from litter
Have you ever seen litter in the oceans? If you have, do you pick it up? Let me know in the comments .
Why we need to protect our oceans from litter
By Lilly
In my opinion you should stop littering because the litter can kill them if they eat it or get tangled up in it.
Another point is if you litter please think twice, because if you don't pick it up and it goes in the water it could and probably will kill an animal.
Finally, it could even expand in their body if they swallow it. It will tangle around their stomach and it will cause them to die.
I therefore believe that we should not leave our litter in the ocean because it is killing the sea life in many different ways without the sea life we would have no fish to eat.
Friday, August 9, 2019
Great geometrocity
in maths we have to make a geometry city with paper and card.Have you ever made a geometry city? if you have tell me what places you had in your city (this is work in progress).
Wednesday, August 7, 2019
catchy character description!
In literacy we where asked to make a Character description about someone from our book club book barking mad.Have you ever made a character description?If so tell me in the comment what book you did it on.i did my description on Finn because i knew the most about him.
Friday, August 2, 2019
The perfect pasta report.
In homebase hauora we are doing a report on our favourite food as you can tell mine is pasta what is your favourite food?
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