Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, March 26, 2020
The epic birthday present
For the next 3 weeks we will be doing home learning because of covid-19 ,The teachers have set up a slide show full of activities we have to complete,I will be posting on my blog a bit more often the usual.I decided to do a writing task,I wrote a report of the event...What would you do if you got a giraffe for your birthday? I would be pretty surprised!! They are pretty big and tall!
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Lilly! Great report, fancy getting a giraffe for your birthday! Next time I would love to see a catchy title for your blog.
ReplyDeleteCool!
ReplyDeleteOh my! Imagine getting a giraffe for your birthday! Remember to follow the Think 6 model when writing your blog post. There is a reminder of this on the home learning slide. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWoah! that would be cool getting a giraffe for your birthday! remember next time to add a title!
ReplyDeleteoop-I forgot my title
DeleteHi there Lilly
ReplyDeleteImagine opening up a giraffe for your birthday, your blog made me laugh. Remember to proof read your blogs for punctuation, great work!