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Thursday, March 26, 2020

The epic birthday present


For the next 3 weeks we will be doing home learning because of covid-19 ,The teachers have set up a slide show full of activities we have to complete,I will be posting on my blog a bit more often the usual.I decided to do a writing task,I wrote a report of the event...What would you do if you got a giraffe  for your birthday?  I would be pretty surprised!! They are pretty big and tall!

6 comments:

  1. Hi Lilly! Great report, fancy getting a giraffe for your birthday! Next time I would love to see a catchy title for your blog.

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  2. Oh my! Imagine getting a giraffe for your birthday! Remember to follow the Think 6 model when writing your blog post. There is a reminder of this on the home learning slide. Keep it up!

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  3. Woah! that would be cool getting a giraffe for your birthday! remember next time to add a title!

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  4. Hi there Lilly
    Imagine opening up a giraffe for your birthday, your blog made me laugh. Remember to proof read your blogs for punctuation, great work!

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